Monday, August 18, 2008

This I Believe- Draft 2

I believe you should always take the time to spend time with your family. It was told to me throughtout life because spending time with your family is an important bond. It shaped my way of life and my way of thinking in a good way. I think that I would never learned anything during my childhood or at any time in your life without spending time with your family for example, it is more than likely that I would've never learned to ride a bicycle, swim, walk, talk, or have good manners without spending time with your family. Some of these might be extreme but most of these I would've never accomplished without family, most of the basic skills I have right now in some way or form come back to the roots of spending time with your family. At one point in my life I saw that it is also important because life is short and time with my family is short. I think I should spend time with my family whenever possible because before I know it I won't live with them anymore and since time is not on anybody's side they will not be with me anymore and after that I would've lost one of my chances to spend time with my family. The second chance to spend time with my family will come up when I have a family of my own, this will be second and last chance to cherish moments with your family because before I know it the same thing that happened before where I lost one of your chances to spend time with them will eventually go away overtime just like the first chance. If you start to grow a strong bond with your family by spending time with them the process will repeat for generations where your kids spend time with their kids and etc. People who spend time with their family at a younger age tend to usually have children who want to spend time with their family. I believe that I don't have to spend time with them all the time like I have nothing else to do but just take some spare time with them when its available. Just ask yourself this, When you're older would you want your family to spend time with you? I would.......................................

2 comments:

Ace said...

"I think that I would never learned anything during my childhood or at any time in your life without spending time with your family for example," don't shift from I to you.

Ace said...

need some detail, too much "big picture" and not enough actual imagery.